Ashiuhto
Senior Member
- Joined
- Nov 30, 2010
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- Taiwan
- Current Location
- Taiwan
Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks!
Last night you called back home saying that you still hadn’t received the money that Mom wired to the Bank of China. We could feel that you were burning with anxiety, and we were also nervous with worry. We didn’t know what key link went wrong. Luckily, this morning you were unwilling to give up and went for a Hail Mary at the bank which is still open on Saturday morning.
Last night you called back home saying that you still hadn’t received the money that Mom wired to the Bank of China. We could feel that you were burning with anxiety, and we were also nervous with worry. We didn’t know what key link went wrong. Luckily, this morning you were unwilling to give up and went for a Hail Mary at the bank which is still open on Saturday morning.