Peter.Peter
New member
- Joined
- Oct 25, 2014
- Member Type
- Other
- Native Language
- Slovak
- Home Country
- Slovak Republic
- Current Location
- Slovak Republic
Hi there everyone,
I´m brand new here, and I would like to ask somebody for help. I´m writing my cover letter (in english for first time), and I know my english isn´t perfect. So, can you check me these sentences and correct mistakes please (written in italic)?
1. I gained a great deal of experiences from areas as marketing, management, communication and project/product management at my previous job.
(here is for me important, if I need use experience/or experiences)
2. During the period of employment for TV Media I led a small business marketing team and I attended an estimated more than 2000 business meetings with business partners and clients of the company.
(I don´t work there anymore - Did I use correct tense?)
3. I always tried meet the needs of my business partners and build strong long-lasting relationships with them.
(same question - did I use correct tense? - is correct I always tried .... or I´ve always tried ....)
4. I also often cooperated at creating and implementation of marketing, PR and communication strategies of the company.
(here is for me important, if I need write in this sentence - the marketing, the PR and the communication strategies of the company - probably not, I think - and - is it correct to use "cooperated at creating, ... or cooperated in creating ....)
5. Thanks to my more than 3 years of experience working as a Marketing Director and more than 2 years of experiences working as a Marketing Specialist in a company operating on the media and marketing sector, I am highly skilled at creating commercial campaigns, (ATL and BTL) marketing campaigns and others marketing, PR and communication projects.
(is this sentence correct?)
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I will be very grateful for any advice.
Thank you.
I´m brand new here, and I would like to ask somebody for help. I´m writing my cover letter (in english for first time), and I know my english isn´t perfect. So, can you check me these sentences and correct mistakes please (written in italic)?
1. I gained a great deal of experiences from areas as marketing, management, communication and project/product management at my previous job.
(here is for me important, if I need use experience/or experiences)
2. During the period of employment for TV Media I led a small business marketing team and I attended an estimated more than 2000 business meetings with business partners and clients of the company.
(I don´t work there anymore - Did I use correct tense?)
3. I always tried meet the needs of my business partners and build strong long-lasting relationships with them.
(same question - did I use correct tense? - is correct I always tried .... or I´ve always tried ....)
4. I also often cooperated at creating and implementation of marketing, PR and communication strategies of the company.
(here is for me important, if I need write in this sentence - the marketing, the PR and the communication strategies of the company - probably not, I think - and - is it correct to use "cooperated at creating, ... or cooperated in creating ....)
5. Thanks to my more than 3 years of experience working as a Marketing Director and more than 2 years of experiences working as a Marketing Specialist in a company operating on the media and marketing sector, I am highly skilled at creating commercial campaigns, (ATL and BTL) marketing campaigns and others marketing, PR and communication projects.
(is this sentence correct?)
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I will be very grateful for any advice.
Thank you.