[Cover Letter] Cover letter problems

[Peter.Peter]

Hi there everyone,

I´m brand new here, and I would like to ask somebody for help. I´m writing my cover letter (in english for first time), and I know my english isn´t perfect. So, can you check me these sentences and correct mistakes please (written in italic)?

1. I gained a great deal of experiences from areas as marketing, management, communication and project/product management at my previous job.

(here is for me important, if I need use experience/or experiences)

2. During the period of employment for TV Media I led a small business marketing team and I attended an estimated more than 2000 business meetings with business partners and clients of the company.

(I don´t work there anymore - Did I use correct tense?)

3. I always tried meet the needs of my business partners and build strong long-lasting relationships with them.

(same question - did I use correct tense? - is correct I always tried .... or I´ve always tried ....)

4. I also often cooperated at creating and implementation of marketing, PR and communication strategies of the company.

(here is for me important, if I need write in this sentence - the marketing, the PR and the communication strategies of the company - probably not, I think - and - is it correct to use "cooperated at creating, ... or cooperated in creating ....)

5. Thanks to my more than 3 years of experience working as a Marketing Director and more than 2 years of experiences working as a Marketing Specialist in a company operating on the media and marketing sector, I am highly skilled at creating commercial campaigns, (ATL and BTL) marketing campaigns and others marketing, PR and communication projects.

(is this sentence correct?)

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I will be very grateful for any advice.

Thank you.

 

[tedmc]

I´m [STRIKE]brand [/STRIKE]new here, and I would like to ask somebody for help. I´m writing my cover letter (in English for first time), and I know my English isn´t perfect. So, can you check for me these sentences and correct mistakes please (written in italic)?

1. I gained a great deal of experience[STRIKE]s[/STRIKE][STRIKE] from areas as[/STRIKE] in marketing, management, communication and project/product management[STRIKE] at[/STRIKE] from my previous job.

(here is for me important, if I need use experience/or experiences)

2. During the period of employment [STRIKE]for[/STRIKE]with TV Media I led a small business marketing team and I attended [STRIKE]an estimated [/STRIKE]more than 2000 business meetings with business partners and clients of the company.

(I don´t work there anymore - Did I use correct tense?)

3. I have always tried to meet the needs of my business partners and build strong long-lasting relationships with them.

(same question - did I use correct tense? - is correct I always tried .... or I´ve always tried ....)

4. I also have often [STRIKE]cooperated[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]at [/STRIKE][STRIKE]creating[/STRIKE] been involved in the planning and implementation stages of marketing, PR and communication strategies of the company.

(here is for me important, if I need write in this sentence - the marketing, the PR and the communication strategies of the company - probably not, I think - and - is it correct to use "cooperated at creating, ... or cooperated in creating ....)

5. Thanks to my more than 3 years of experience working as a Marketing Director and more than 2 years of experience[STRIKE]s [/STRIKE]working as a Marketing Specialist in a company operating [STRIKE]on [/STRIKE] in the media and marketing sector, I am highly [STRIKE]skilled [/STRIKE] competent at creating commercial campaigns, (ATL and BTL) marketing campaigns and other[STRIKE]s [/STRIKE]marketing, PR and communication projects.

 

[Peter.Peter]

THANK YOU "tedmc" !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :up::up:

 

[Peter.Peter]

I have a one more question. Did I use correct words and tenses in this sentences?
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1. I was a member of the production team (as a director, copywriter and manager for the budget) in production of more than 600 audio-visual commercial projects including commercial spots, commercial documents and interviews, various commercial and non-commercial formats of audio-visual programs and about 10 large corporate presentations.


2. I have written hundreds of marketing texts not only for advertising spots, but also for corporate presentations, catalogs, commercial interviews and PR films.

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Thank you very-very much for your help.