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In 2013, [..] received his B.Eng. degree in Computer Science with specialization in Network Engineering
formfrom The Hague University of Applied Sciences, Hague, Netherlands. DuringWhile carrying out his engineering project, he prepared the design of wired and wireless network infrastructure and developed theincorporated it into the newarchitectural plans of the building w ith the plotted infrastructure of the designed computer network.(I do not think a computer engineer would be able to do architectural plans)
He possesses a wide array of skills and specialized knowledge in the design, implementation, management and maintenance of fully redundant high-
availableavailability fault-tolerant network architectures, of both the wired and wireless connections. He is specialistspecialised in design and developed a scalable low-cost and high-performance network infrastructure. He has the ability to develop procedures and solutions that improve network disaster recovery and business continuity.
In addition to his academic activities, he conducted research focused on design, implementation and operation of novel algorithm using artificial intelligence. Within the framework of his research he developed two solutions and presented their result in his two scientific publications.
His main research interests are in communication theory, high-availability network, infrastructure network for industry.
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