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Essay: Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job traight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion
I spent 3 hours writing this essay for preparing the Ielts Exam ahead. I can't afford to go to English Centre, so please check both grammar and vocabulary. hihi
The issue of gaining tertiary education is controversy nowadays. Some people argue that school leavers should look for a job after finishing high school instead of spending their valuable time and money on studying at university. However, I believe that university or college education is one of the best way leading to a successful career.
There are strong arguments in favour of refusing to go to university. To begin with, the costs of studying, including housing tuition and transport, can be costly. On average, a student in my university expends yearly amount of money approximately 5000$. Instead of spending this chunk of money, many young people choose using it to set up business which can lead to a higher income level. Furthermore, the success of jobs, don’t require less tertiary education, but depend on a person’t innate abilities as well as on-the-job training and practical experience. For instance, Bill Gate, the founder of Microsoft Corporation, quited the most well-known university to pursue business career, becoming the richest man in the world.
In spite of compelling argument, I strong believe that going to university is necessary for anyone to achieve a successful career. Firstly, university education provides learners specialized knowledge in particular fields. Most people standing at high position in company’s hierarchy such as managers, CEOs, directors need university degrees. Secondly, more and more jobs require education beyond high school. College graduates have more suitable jobs to choose from than those who do not pursue tertiary education. Finally, building up their self-discipline and independent thinking ability during the period of studying is one of the most important qualification helping employees to do well jobs
In conclusion. There are various reasons for why young people don’t choose to go to university. Nevertheless, I think that it would be better for any one to achive university education
P/s: how can I alter several phrase which is repeated many times in essay: a successful career, go to/ study at university, tertiary education
I spent 3 hours writing this essay for preparing the Ielts Exam ahead. I can't afford to go to English Centre, so please check both grammar and vocabulary. hihi
The issue of gaining tertiary education is controversy nowadays. Some people argue that school leavers should look for a job after finishing high school instead of spending their valuable time and money on studying at university. However, I believe that university or college education is one of the best way leading to a successful career.
There are strong arguments in favour of refusing to go to university. To begin with, the costs of studying, including housing tuition and transport, can be costly. On average, a student in my university expends yearly amount of money approximately 5000$. Instead of spending this chunk of money, many young people choose using it to set up business which can lead to a higher income level. Furthermore, the success of jobs, don’t require less tertiary education, but depend on a person’t innate abilities as well as on-the-job training and practical experience. For instance, Bill Gate, the founder of Microsoft Corporation, quited the most well-known university to pursue business career, becoming the richest man in the world.
In spite of compelling argument, I strong believe that going to university is necessary for anyone to achieve a successful career. Firstly, university education provides learners specialized knowledge in particular fields. Most people standing at high position in company’s hierarchy such as managers, CEOs, directors need university degrees. Secondly, more and more jobs require education beyond high school. College graduates have more suitable jobs to choose from than those who do not pursue tertiary education. Finally, building up their self-discipline and independent thinking ability during the period of studying is one of the most important qualification helping employees to do well jobs
In conclusion. There are various reasons for why young people don’t choose to go to university. Nevertheless, I think that it would be better for any one to achive university education
P/s: how can I alter several phrase which is repeated many times in essay: a successful career, go to/ study at university, tertiary education
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