have the wonder

[lupo.hp]

Hello, I'm writing a song, and I was wondering if the sentence "you have the wonder of a beautiful sunset" makes any sense. it is intended as a compliment to a female, meaning "you're as wonderful as a beautiful sunset"

 

[Raymott]

Pretty much any lyrics can make up a song if you have the right music to go with it. Yes, what you've written is good enough.