A policeman and a prison guard joint forces

[Gaya87]

If there are any grammatical mistakes, please let me know. Thank you.

A policeman and a prison guard joint forces to take down a major gangster when the cop agrees to save the guard’s daughter who suffers leukemia.

A tough Hong Kong cop Kit busts a major gangster only to find his cover blown and his main witness gone. The gangster in retaliation has him kidnapped and put in a Thai jail with a false criminal identity. A lowly prison guard Chai with extraordinary fighting skills guards Kit and prevents his escape from prison. The prison guard discovers Kit’s real identity and helps him to escape in return for his agreeing to save his daughter.

 

[tedmc]

A policeman and a prison guard join[STRIKE]t [/STRIKE]forces to take down a major gangster when the cop agrees to save the guard’s daughter who suffers from leukemia.

A tough Hong Kong cop, Kit, busts a major gangster only to find his cover blown and his main witness gone. The gangster, in retaliation, has him kidnapped and put in a Thai jail with a false criminal identity. A lowly prison guard Chai with extraordinary fighting skills guards Kit and prevents his escape from prison. The prison guard discovers Kit’s real identity and helps him to escape in return for his agreeing to save his daughter.

Is it your job writing synopses for movies?

 

[emsr2d2]

You can use "join forces" or "joined forces" but not "joint forces" here.

 

[teechar]

This was already answered on another forum (with at least one double post there too!).

https://www.englishforums.com/English/IfGrammaticalMistakesThank/bwqhwc/post.htm
https://www.englishforums.com/English/IfGrammaticalMistakesThank/bwqhjn/post.htm
https://www.englishforums.com/English/IfGrammaticalMistakesThank/bwqhhx/post.htm

Please do not waste our time!
:-(

 

[Gaya87]

This was already answered on another forum (with at least one double post there too!).

https://www.englishforums.com/English/IfGrammaticalMistakesThank/bwqhwc/post.htm
https://www.englishforums.com/English/IfGrammaticalMistakesThank/bwqhjn/post.htm
https://www.englishforums.com/English/IfGrammaticalMistakesThank/bwqhhx/post.htm

Please do not waste our time!
:-(

Dear Teechar,

Thanks for your kind concern. Yes, I’m the one who post it earlier, but I feel more secure using this website instead of English forum. I still didn’t get a proper explanation for one of my question regarding my past tense topic. I already deleted my acc few days ago and I find it hassle using these two various forums. Definitely you won’t be seeing any double post anymore from my side. Sorry for the inconvenience caused. Thanks.