[Grammar] Need Music Video? No money?

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Ruslan Seyidov

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Hey guys,
I am not really good in English, and I am writing facebook post right now:

"Need Music Video? No money?Send us your track! We will write you back, discuss all details, meet and shoot an amazing music video for free!
ONLY ONE spot, do not be late!"

Can you please check and rephrase this few sentences so they sound better?
Thanks in advance!
 

emsr2d2

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Hey guys,
I am not really good [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] at English, and I am writing a Facebook post right now:

"Need a music video? No money? (space here) Send us your track! We will [STRIKE]write you back[/STRIKE] contact you quickly, discuss all the details, meet you and then shoot an amazing music video for free!
ONLY ONE spot available - [STRIKE]do not be late[/STRIKE] don't miss out! Apply now!"

Can you please check and rephrase [STRIKE]this[/STRIKE] these few sentences so they sound better?

[STRIKE]Thanks in advance![/STRIKE] Unnecessary. Thank us after we've helped by clicking on the "Thank" button.

See above.
 
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