The status of a teacher in

[Untaught88]

Hi,

Can you please point out my mistakes in the following paragraph?

"The status of a teacher in XXX (religion's name) is very high. Our XXX (person's name) says that a teacher is a spiritual father and he has the same rights over his students as a father has over his children. XXX (person's name) says that whoever has taught him even a single word is my teacher."

 

[Untaught88]

@Piscean, Thank you. I've edited my post. Please check now.

 

[emsr2d2]

Are all the teachers you're talking about male?

 

[Untaught88]

In my language it's always used ''spiritual father''. I've never heard of ''spiritual mother'' but it doesn't mean they are not teachers.

 

[emsr2d2]

I understand that but you used "he/his" in your post. If some of these teachers are female (even if they are rather oddly referred to as "spiritual father"), then you need to say "he/she" and "his/her" in your post, rather than only "he" and "his" as you did.