caban
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I am writing my next essay and I am curious what do you think about couple of my sentences. I am interested whether they are grammatically and syntactically correct as well as if they are logical and clear.
Those are the first sentences of the first paragraph:
Frustration. The child born from the marriage of will and opposition. The bastard which neither of them wants.
Here is the rest:
In the beginning there was nothing. Once the language fellow appeared on the scene, he plunged his magical hand into that nothing, and out of it he brought the first something into existence.
To put it in another way, the defining lines which draw boundaries between words are always chosen by the convenience tango between time and circumstance.
Thank you
Those are the first sentences of the first paragraph:
Frustration. The child born from the marriage of will and opposition. The bastard which neither of them wants.
Here is the rest:
In the beginning there was nothing. Once the language fellow appeared on the scene, he plunged his magical hand into that nothing, and out of it he brought the first something into existence.
To put it in another way, the defining lines which draw boundaries between words are always chosen by the convenience tango between time and circumstance.
Thank you