[Cover Letter] Please correct my cover letter. Thank you so much.

[Mandy Jansen]

Although I am aware that my application might come in too late, I really would love to apply for the position of Operations Assistant at your company as posted in the Amigoe newspaper.

Before I came to Curacao I have had several demanding administrative, secretarial and purchasing jobs. These have always included deadlines and high pressure. This has been something I have really been missing as I thrive under pressure. I really would love to get back into real business again.

Although I don’t have any technical experience I found that it’s never too late to learn. In the past I have learned about Automotives and Steel constructions. Subsea Global Solutions looks like the perfect place for me to work for as I really enjoy being surrounded by people from different regions of the world.

 

[Tarheel]

Say:

Before I came to Curacao, I had several....

And:

This is something I have really been missing, as I thrive under pressure.

And:

Although I don't have any technical experience, I have found that it's never too late to learn.

By "automotives" do you mean automobile manufacture?

Capitalize only proper nouns.