Yes, it is obvious that the effect of the bleeding gets [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] worse (no comma here) but I want to create [STRIKE]an opposite[/STRIKE] a sentence which has the opposite idea.
Maybe think about it like [STRIKE]that[/STRIKE] this:
There is a knife (no comma here) and [STRIKE]with[/STRIKE] every time I [STRIKE]using[/STRIKE] use it, I hurt myself. [STRIKE]and here, it is[/STRIKE] In this situation, of course, [STRIKE]that:[/STRIKE] I'm using it, I hurt myself, and I'm bleeding - with every minute I'm bleeding more, but try to imagine that this is magic (no comma here) and, with every use, instead of [STRIKE]more[/STRIKE] bleeding more, I bleed less. [STRIKE]bleeding.[/STRIKE]
You are thinking about this as a [STRIKE]more[/STRIKE] realistic situation, but you shouldn't.
This sentence would be used for a science-fiction [STRIKE]newspaper[/STRIKE] story/book/magazine/film.
What part of my sentence is incorrect?