navi tasan
Key Member
- Joined
- Nov 19, 2002
- Member Type
- Academic
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- United States
1) He suddenly burst into the room, Jane jumping to her feet in surprise.
2) He suddenly burst into the room, with Jane jumping to her feet in surprise.
3) I opened the door, the bucket of ice water falling on my head.
4) I opened the door, with the bucket of ice water falling on my head.
Are the above sentences correct? The second action (Jane's jumping to her feet in surprise and the bucket falling on my head) is supposed to be a consequence of the first in every case.
Gratefully,
Navi.
2) He suddenly burst into the room, with Jane jumping to her feet in surprise.
3) I opened the door, the bucket of ice water falling on my head.
4) I opened the door, with the bucket of ice water falling on my head.
Are the above sentences correct? The second action (Jane's jumping to her feet in surprise and the bucket falling on my head) is supposed to be a consequence of the first in every case.
Gratefully,
Navi.