[Cover Letter] Please kindly correct this motivation letter

[shapol46]

I'll write soon!

 

[teechar]

A few statements are not mine! I have changed them a little

What do you mean by that? Would you care to tell us which ones?

 

[shapol46]

What do you mean by that? Would you care to tell us which ones?

Well, I mean I used some websites. In the third paragraph "It was 1990, ..." I used Wikipedia and other websites, but I tried to rephrase the statements. I don't consider them as plagiarism.

 

[teechar]

You don't need to use text from other sources when writing a letter of motivation. You just need to talk about your abilities, achievements, objectives and whatever else you deem relevant to your application. It's all about you, and it's about convincing the addressee that you're a worthy candidate. I suggest you rewrite/edit your letter accordingly, and we'll be glad to help you with it.

 

[shapol46]

You don't need to use text from other sources when writing a letter of motivation. You just need to talk about your abilities, achievements, objectives and whatever else you deem relevant to your application. It's all about you, and it's about convincing the addressee that you're a worthy candidate. I suggest you rewrite/edit your letter accordingly, and we'll be glad to help you with it.

Ok. The problem is I know that in theory but I can't write in a convincing way.I try. Thanks

 

[emsr2d2]

OP has deleted the entire contents of post #1, rendering this thread pointless so I'm closing it.

Shapol46, please start a new thread once you've written a new motivation letter and please note, for future reference, that it is not appropriate to delete the contents of a post which has attracted responses.