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chowbarry

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Please help me improve the following tree inspection report. Thank you.

As per our earlier telephone conversation, there are three number of trees having found fallen at the footpath between Empire Road and the entrance of our clubhouse today morning due to heavy rain in recent days. In view of the fallen trees and their debris currently lying on the captioned path and causing great disturbance to the members of public, we trust that you are obliged to try your utmost endeavor to clear all the fallen trees and their debris within today.

Also, since it is not the first time the trees at the captioned location being found fallen and having broken branch, it have increasingly raised the District Mayor, Mr. Williams's deep concern about the health and structural condition of the trees there. As such, we would like to seek your urgent assistance in arranging a professional arborist to thoroughly check all the trees, particularly those of mature development and advising me what necessary mitigation action should be taken in order to uphold the public safety.

Considering the urgency of the matter, we look forward to learning your professional assessment on the trees by the end of this month. Enclosed please find the location map and the photos regarding the trees shortlisted to be checked by your professional arborist for your reference. Thank you for your urgent assistance.
 

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Please help me improve the following tree inspection report. Thank you.

As per our earlier telephone conversation, there are three [STRIKE]number of[/STRIKE] trees [STRIKE]having[/STRIKE] found fallen at the footpath between Empire Road and the entrance of our clubhouse[STRIKE] today[/STRIKE] this morning due to heavy rain [STRIKE]in recent [/STRIKE] the last few days. In view of the fallen trees and their debris currently lying on the [STRIKE]captioned[/STRIKE] path[STRIKE] and [/STRIKE]causing [STRIKE]great disturbance[/STRIKE] nuisance to the members of public, we [STRIKE]trust that [/STRIKE] expect you [STRIKE]are obliged to try your utmost [/STRIKE] to use your best endeavor to clear all the fallen trees and their debris [STRIKE]within [/STRIKE]today.

Also, since[STRIKE] it[/STRIKE] this is not the first time the trees at the [STRIKE]captioned[/STRIKE] location [STRIKE]being [/STRIKE] had been found fallen and having broken branches, [STRIKE]it have increasingly raised[/STRIKE] the District Mayor, Mr. Williams has expressed his deep concern about the health and structural conditions of the trees there. As such, we would like to seek your urgent [STRIKE]assistance[/STRIKE] attention in arranging a for professional arborist to thoroughly check all the trees, particularly those [STRIKE]of [/STRIKE]mature [STRIKE]development[/STRIKE] ones and advising me [STRIKE]what[/STRIKE] the necessary mitigation action should be taken[STRIKE] in order to uphold the[/STRIKE] for the sake of public safety.

Considering the urgency of the matter, we look forward to[STRIKE] learning[/STRIKE] your professional assessment [STRIKE]on[/STRIKE] of the trees by the end of this month. Enclosed please find the location map and the photos regarding the trees [STRIKE]shortlisted [/STRIKE] identified to be checked by your professional arborist for your reference. Thank you for your urgent [STRIKE]assistance[/STRIKE] attention to the problem.
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Also, since[STRIKE] it[/STRIKE] this is not the first time the trees at the [STRIKE]captioned[/STRIKE] location [STRIKE]being [/STRIKE] [STRIKE]had [/STRIKE] have been found fallen and having broken branches, [STRIKE]it have increasingly raised[/STRIKE] the District Mayor, Mr. Williams has expressed his deep concern about the health and structural conditions of the trees there.

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