Simone1
Member
- Joined
- Sep 24, 2016
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Italian
- Home Country
- Italy
- Current Location
- Italy
[FONT=Calibri, serif]Could you correct me this sentences?[/FONT]
hi everyone,
I’m learning English.
could you correct me a this sentences?
[FONT=Calibri, serif]this senteces are thought, they haven’t a logical order.[/FONT]
[FONT=Calibri, serif]Sorry for my mistakes. Thanks in advance[/FONT][FONT=Calibri, serif].[/FONT]
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[FONT=Calibri, serif]why would you like to do the au-pair?[/FONT]
[FONT=Calibri, serif]I would like this experience because I love children (I have [/FONT][FONT=Calibri, serif]2 nieces and a nephew)[/FONT][FONT=Calibri, serif], [/FONT][FONT=Calibri, serif]to[/FONT][FONT=Calibri, serif] know a new culture and [/FONT][FONT=Calibri, serif]to [/FONT][FONT=Calibri, serif]increase my English [/FONT]
[FONT=Calibri, serif]My main goal is speak and understand this language in correct way.[/FONT]
[FONT=Calibri, serif]English will [/FONT][FONT=Calibri, serif]be useful to[/FONT][FONT=Calibri, serif] my professional future. [/FONT]
[FONT=Calibri, serif]( In Italy I have no change/possibility to speak it every day)[/FONT]
[FONT=Calibri, serif]I want [/FONT][FONT=Calibri, serif]t[/FONT][FONT=Calibri, serif]o[/FONT][FONT=Calibri, serif] [/FONT][FONT=Calibri, serif]make this experience in UK to improve my English skills.[/FONT]
[FONT=Calibri, serif]I would exclude London because it's commonly known that here there're lots of turist and not many English mother languages.[/FONT]
[FONT=Calibri, serif]I consider/take in consideration this experience because according to me it's the only way to go to live in a foreign country.[/FONT]
[FONT=Calibri, serif]Find [/FONT][FONT=Calibri, serif]a[/FONT][FONT=Calibri, serif] job directly in Uk, it's very difficult, [/FONT][FONT=Calibri, serif]especially/above all)[/FONT][FONT=Calibri, serif] if you don't speak English very well.[/FONT]
[FONT=Calibri, serif]In this way I have a support, I’m protect and [/FONT][FONT=Calibri, serif]I’have a [/FONT][FONT=Calibri, serif] roof where stay in exchange for work.[/FONT]
[FONT=Calibri, serif]According to me, my English level is [/FONT][FONT=Calibri, serif]basic. [/FONT]
[FONT=Calibri, serif]In this moment I don’t [/FONT][FONT=Calibri, serif]want to [/FONT][FONT=Calibri, serif]move permanently in UK.[/FONT]
[FONT=Calibri, serif]I don’t speak English well and find a job in England would be very difficult.[/FONT]
[FONT=Calibri, serif]I’m [/FONT][FONT=Calibri, serif]realistic. Why firms [/FONT][FONT=Calibri, serif]should hire a person who do[/FONT][FONT=Calibri, serif]es[/FONT][FONT=Calibri, serif]n’t speak English very well? [/FONT]
[FONT=Calibri, serif]I’m one of the many.[/FONT]
[FONT=Calibri, serif]In Italy I did a English course (basic level) [/FONT][FONT=Calibri, serif]of[/FONT][FONT=Calibri, serif] 92 hours, but it's the not the same thing to speak English every day. [/FONT]
[FONT=Calibri, serif]I try (almost every day) to listen or watch something in English.[/FONT]
[FONT=Calibri, serif]I’m self-taught so nobody correct my mistakes.[/FONT]
[FONT=Calibri, serif]This experience [/FONT][FONT=Calibri, serif]can make me grow so much[/FONT]
[FONT=Calibri, serif]It’s s the first time away from home.[/FONT]
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Thank you very much! bye
Thank you very much! bye