[General] could someone help me correct this annual meeting opening speech

[Aries Gong]

Dear Leaders, distinguished guests, friends and colleagues, good evening!

Today we travel across distances to have a joyous gathering and greet the approach of the new year. We get together in 2016 annual dinner to bid farewell to the old and usher in the new. 2015 is filled with wonderful stories, we enjoyed happiness together while spared no efforts to work towards the common goal. Looking back on the past year, all of us worked hard day in and day out to build a stronger and better company.

Now I announce, 2016 Annual Dinner begins,hope all of you have a wonderful night!



Thanks in advance for helping me correct it!

 

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Dear leaders, distinguished guests, friends and colleagues, good evening!

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