I received an email from an officer

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yslamac

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Hello everyone, I received an email regarding to the arrangement of the interview from a human resource officer, but I find it strange. Can you please kindly amend the below email so I can avoid the mistakes next time? Thank you!:)

Please be reminded to bring along your originals past job references, education certificates, latest income proof and a recent photo with you to the interview. Appreciate if you can also complete the attached forms before the interview. Thanks.


 

Tony Phillips

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"Please be reminded to bring original copies of all your past job references, education certificates...". The rest is ok.
 

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I don't like "Please be reminded to ...".

Please remember to bring original ...
Please don't forget to bring original ...
Please bring original ...
 

yslamac

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I thought beginning the sentence with "Appreciate if" is incorrect, but it turns out everyone accept this expression...lol
 

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I thought beginning the sentence with "Appreciate if" is incorrect, but it turns out everyone accept this expression...lol
You cannot start the sentence without a subject - "Appreciate if".
 
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