Ertanabest
New member
- Joined
- Dec 30, 2016
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Indonesian
- Home Country
- Indonesia
- Current Location
- Indonesia
HI all,
i need someone to correct my cover latter (CL) in grammar or maybe there some missing point. to get this CL properly in order . i am open for any suggestion and opinion about my CL .
thank you
Dear Mr.
Hi, my name is Frederick Taka i am 35 years old Indonesian welder i am looking for a sponsor because i dont have permit yet to work in Canada
. My experience in welding is more than 4 years.
Since January 2016 i am open my own welding shop and manage it together with my friend. Our job is
Make or fabricated a fences,gates,racks and other commercial structure. Before it i worked with
Company named PT.Vorkon as a welder from 2007. Vorkon is man Power Company I had worked with other company (user) Under the Vorkon company.
Our user is Mi SWACO,bukaka,tatamulya,and more.most of the company i had worked
With has main duty in construction buildings, bridges and towers. More information you can find in my resume letter
I have Canadian experienced, as a carrier in local newspaper company in Vancouver.To make my own distribution company is become my goal at that time
but before I can achieve my goal my refugee claimant rejected by the Canadian government I got departure order. So I have to go back home to my country Indonesia
and I have been cooperative with the Canadian government till all process finished. (2010-2014) it is means i am not deported and can go back to Canada
in normal manner.
Canada has more opportunity for the future compared to my country.
That’s the reason I am motivated to go back to Canada. i have applied for a visitor visa and will be available in Vancouver around January and February 2017.
I am continuing working as a welder in Indonesia. 4 years not holding a welding holder does not make me changing track to choose other job. Until now I am still doing it and I am happy with it.
I have interest in a new challenge, and commit myself to do the best; i have ears that always open for any input to make me better in doing my job.
Please review my resume in there I put my link to my welding demo videos and other documents that needed.
(Police record, welding certificate, and more)
Best regards
Frederick Taka
NOTE : if there is welding procedure specification WPS from you i would like to make a video demo of it live by skype or offline anything you preferred.
Wages are negotiable.
i need someone to correct my cover latter (CL) in grammar or maybe there some missing point. to get this CL properly in order . i am open for any suggestion and opinion about my CL .
thank you
Dear Mr.
Hi, my name is Frederick Taka i am 35 years old Indonesian welder i am looking for a sponsor because i dont have permit yet to work in Canada
. My experience in welding is more than 4 years.
Since January 2016 i am open my own welding shop and manage it together with my friend. Our job is
Make or fabricated a fences,gates,racks and other commercial structure. Before it i worked with
Company named PT.Vorkon as a welder from 2007. Vorkon is man Power Company I had worked with other company (user) Under the Vorkon company.
Our user is Mi SWACO,bukaka,tatamulya,and more.most of the company i had worked
With has main duty in construction buildings, bridges and towers. More information you can find in my resume letter
I have Canadian experienced, as a carrier in local newspaper company in Vancouver.To make my own distribution company is become my goal at that time
but before I can achieve my goal my refugee claimant rejected by the Canadian government I got departure order. So I have to go back home to my country Indonesia
and I have been cooperative with the Canadian government till all process finished. (2010-2014) it is means i am not deported and can go back to Canada
in normal manner.
Canada has more opportunity for the future compared to my country.
That’s the reason I am motivated to go back to Canada. i have applied for a visitor visa and will be available in Vancouver around January and February 2017.
I am continuing working as a welder in Indonesia. 4 years not holding a welding holder does not make me changing track to choose other job. Until now I am still doing it and I am happy with it.
I have interest in a new challenge, and commit myself to do the best; i have ears that always open for any input to make me better in doing my job.
Please review my resume in there I put my link to my welding demo videos and other documents that needed.
(Police record, welding certificate, and more)
Best regards
Frederick Taka
NOTE : if there is welding procedure specification WPS from you i would like to make a video demo of it live by skype or offline anything you preferred.
Wages are negotiable.