Is this correct?

[sanjfer]

It has been reported that you have unnoticed that a female member entered into the gym while maintenance men are working in the gyy. As you were in the reception, it is your responsibility to ensure that no men are inside the gym before allowing any female member to enter inside. This is a clear case of gross negligence of duties in your capacity as Receptionist.

 

[emsr2d2]

"unnotice" isn't a verb.
What is a "gyy"?

 

[teechar]

It has been [STRIKE]reported[/STRIKE] brought to my attention that you [STRIKE]have unnoticed[/STRIKE] did not notice that a female member entered [STRIKE]into[/STRIKE] the gym while maintenance men [STRIKE]are[/STRIKE] were working there. [STRIKE]in the gyy.[/STRIKE] As you were [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] on [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] reception duty at the time, it [STRIKE]is[/STRIKE] was your responsibility to ensure that no men [STRIKE]are[/STRIKE] were inside the gym before allowing any female member to enter. [STRIKE]inside.[/STRIKE] This is a clear case of gross negligence and a dereliction of your duties [STRIKE]in your capacity[/STRIKE] as receptionist.

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