toanhntm
Member
- Joined
- May 26, 2017
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Vietnamese
- Home Country
- Vietnam
- Current Location
- Vietnam
This is my seventh attempt at writing in English. Please correct any mistakes you find.
Toan and Tam like Vetnamese food. They love Vietnamese food very much. They often go out to a Vietnamese restaurant on the weekend. There are two Vietnamese restaurant close to/near the place that they reside.
The aniversary day of the wedding is coming up. Toan has a plan for having dinner in one of the restaurants. He calls a restaurant to make a reservation, but tables is not available. He thinks he himself will cook some Vietnamese foods to make a surprise to Tam. There is a trouble he cooks very bad. He fries meat, but the meat becomes black colour. He cooks a soup, but the smell soup is very bad.
He thinks he will order some foods in one of the restaurants. He will prepare the place being in front of their house and he will play guitar himself. That is a great day.
The day arrives. Tam is still at work while Toan orders the food. He goes to the restaurant, picks it up and brings it back home. As Tam goes home, he lights up the candles, plays guitar and tell Tam “happy aniversary”.
Tam looks confused. “Today is not the aniversary day. Tomorrow is right”. Toan looks at the calendar and checks. He realizes she is right. He looks back her and smiles.
An aniversary day
Toan and Tam like Vetnamese food. They love Vietnamese food very much. They often go out to a Vietnamese restaurant on the weekend. There are two Vietnamese restaurant close to/near the place that they reside.
The aniversary day of the wedding is coming up. Toan has a plan for having dinner in one of the restaurants. He calls a restaurant to make a reservation, but tables is not available. He thinks he himself will cook some Vietnamese foods to make a surprise to Tam. There is a trouble he cooks very bad. He fries meat, but the meat becomes black colour. He cooks a soup, but the smell soup is very bad.
He thinks he will order some foods in one of the restaurants. He will prepare the place being in front of their house and he will play guitar himself. That is a great day.
The day arrives. Tam is still at work while Toan orders the food. He goes to the restaurant, picks it up and brings it back home. As Tam goes home, he lights up the candles, plays guitar and tell Tam “happy aniversary”.
Tam looks confused. “Today is not the aniversary day. Tomorrow is right”. Toan looks at the calendar and checks. He realizes she is right. He looks back her and smiles.