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New member
- Joined
- Aug 4, 2017
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Polish
- Home Country
- Poland
- Current Location
- Poland
Hello, I wrote the following text:
"Big inventions need big problems. At piffany.net you can draw as many problems as you wish.
Just write what you don't like, what made you angry, what you struggle with and receive a story from another person.
Hopefully, you will find a story, that will help you change the world!"
I was told that it doesn't sound like native speaker's work. But why? Of course that's the case, because I'm not a native speaker. What can I improve in the aforementioned text, so it would sound perfectly well?
Thank you in advance.
"Big inventions need big problems. At piffany.net you can draw as many problems as you wish.
Just write what you don't like, what made you angry, what you struggle with and receive a story from another person.
Hopefully, you will find a story, that will help you change the world!"
I was told that it doesn't sound like native speaker's work. But why? Of course that's the case, because I'm not a native speaker. What can I improve in the aforementioned text, so it would sound perfectly well?
Thank you in advance.