ambitious-girl
Senior Member
- Joined
- Apr 29, 2017
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
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Starting a family involves making a serious commitment. As parents, you are faced with the dilemma of choosing between work and family commitments. You also have to devote a great amount of time, effort and energy to children, ones who actually need a constant control and supervision.
Starting a family involves making a serious commitment. As parents, you are faced with the dilemma of choosing between work and family commitments. You also have to devote a great amount of time, effort and energy to children, ones who actually need a constant control and supervision.