At the station, with an expression

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Nikitus

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Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"At the station, with an expression of total disconnection from the world, he took a bus at random, with no idea of its route. He sat on the back seat of the left side, leaning back and looking at the landscape of the city through the window. Trying to find an answer, he closed his eyes, listening to the sound of the song he heard repeatedly in his headphones, which was repeated again and again ."

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emsr2d2

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Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

At the station, with an expression of total disconnection from the world, he took a bus at random, with no idea of its route. He sat [STRIKE]on[/STRIKE] at the back [STRIKE]seat[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] on the left [STRIKE]side[/STRIKE], leaning back and looking at the landscape of the city through the window. Trying to find an answer, he closed his eyes, listening to the sound of the song [STRIKE]he heard[/STRIKE] being played repeatedly [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] through his headphones. [STRIKE]which was repeated again and again .[/STRIKE]

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