can please correct this letter

[sanjeevfernandes]

To:….
Sub:- Application Withdrawal
Sir/ Madam,
I have applied for a visa to migrate to Canada and the process is going on. Due to some new policy & procedures, I am not intended to continue with it. Hence, I would like to request you to withdraw my application and refund the amount I paid to you.


Please accept my appreciation for time you have invested to look through my file and documents.

 

[tedmc]

To:….
Sub:- [STRIKE]Application Withdrawal [/STRIKE] (Applicant's Name) - Withdrawal of Application for a Migration Visa
Sir/ Madam,

I have applied for a visa to migrate to Canada and [STRIKE]the process is going on[/STRIKE] and the application is being processed. Due to [STRIKE]some [/STRIKE] the new policy & procedures, I[STRIKE] am not intended [/STRIKE] do not intend to continue with it. Hence, I would like [STRIKE]to request you[/STRIKE] to withdraw my application and[STRIKE] refund the amount I paid to you. [/STRIKE] request that the application fee be refunded.


[STRIKE]Please accept my appreciation for time you have invested to look through my file and documents[/STRIKE] I appreciate the time you have spent in processing my application. Thank you.

May I know what the policy and procedures are that have caused you to withdraw your application?

 

[sanjeevfernandes]

For Indian nationals, there are some tight rules nowadays to migrate. Age restrictions, French language etc...