dcintel
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- Apr 9, 2019
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Hi all, Please help me correct the following piece of writing for vocabulary and grammar.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in regards to find a suitable accommodation for my family of three people for this summer trip.
Summer is a wonderful time for holiday and my family would like to take this opportunity to explore New Zealand, which we have been living here for more than five years.
We are currently living in a single house in Palmerston North near Wellington capital. This year, my wife and I would like to takes several days off work after having been industriously working for more than three years since we have been here.
My wife, little three-year old kid and I want to spend approximately 2 weeks to discover and explore some lovely picturesque villages of the Mauri people, and breathtaking views from submits to spectacular oceans. However, we are in tight budget now, because we are saving up to build a new house early next year. Therefore, we are looking for a mobile home that you are offering in your website. A 240-RV compact model would be perfect for us. We believe with that sprinter, we are able to take all our home comforts with us and travel to every nook and corner of New Zealand extremely conveniently.
Your showroom in Robert Street is not very far from us, so please let me know whether we can arrive and take a look on the sprinter on Monday or Tuesday morning this week. We extremely love the 240-RV than other vehicles on the website. It would be a pity if the mobile home were not available for us on the trip.
We are looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Kind regards,
Cuong Tran
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in regards to find a suitable accommodation for my family of three people for this summer trip.
Summer is a wonderful time for holiday and my family would like to take this opportunity to explore New Zealand, which we have been living here for more than five years.
We are currently living in a single house in Palmerston North near Wellington capital. This year, my wife and I would like to takes several days off work after having been industriously working for more than three years since we have been here.
My wife, little three-year old kid and I want to spend approximately 2 weeks to discover and explore some lovely picturesque villages of the Mauri people, and breathtaking views from submits to spectacular oceans. However, we are in tight budget now, because we are saving up to build a new house early next year. Therefore, we are looking for a mobile home that you are offering in your website. A 240-RV compact model would be perfect for us. We believe with that sprinter, we are able to take all our home comforts with us and travel to every nook and corner of New Zealand extremely conveniently.
Your showroom in Robert Street is not very far from us, so please let me know whether we can arrive and take a look on the sprinter on Monday or Tuesday morning this week. We extremely love the 240-RV than other vehicles on the website. It would be a pity if the mobile home were not available for us on the trip.
We are looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Kind regards,
Cuong Tran