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- Chinese
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- Canada
Can someon help proof the letter below?Also, if there is any suggestion for Furture goal, it will be appreciated.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my interest inapplying for the Master of Finance Program xxx starting in May 2020. Since I have a strong academic record and practicalwork experience in the finance and accounting industry, I believe that MFIN - aunique and practice-oriented master's program perfectly suits me and will help enhancemy knowledge base and skills as well as my career prospects.
In 2008, I completed a master's in Economics from xx. As a economics student, I got interested in obtaining afurther master's in finance to enhance my skills and capabilities. After thegraduation, I have been working for accounting firm for more than 10 years. Throughoutmy working experience, I have gained the CPA designation, and an extensiveinsight within this field. My key accounting and financial competenciesinclude, but are not limited to, maintaining financial records, risk assessmentand investment portfolios. In terms of the further professional goals, I amlooking for the position in the capital market.
I believe the Master of Finance Program at xx is perfect for me to study financial knowledge in a morein-depth and systematic way before realizing my dream. I am particularlyinterested in the courses Advanced Corporate Finance and Valuation because Ihave found them essential for me to flexibly navigate financial scenarios atwork. Besides, the curriculum is quite parallel to my ambitions as I want toimprove myself in interpreting financial statements, corporate governance andfinancial modelling. More exciting, MFIN program offers an internationallearning environment where I can gain the advantage to learn to cooperate withpeople from different backgrounds.
With these qualifications, I am confident that I am qualified and ableto perform well in this program. Having the possibility to study at youruniversity would be such a big accomplishment for me, meanwhile having thechance to build my future and possible career represents a huge milestone toreach.
Thank you for considering my application, and I look forward to yourreply.
Sincerely,
xx
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my interest inapplying for the Master of Finance Program xxx starting in May 2020. Since I have a strong academic record and practicalwork experience in the finance and accounting industry, I believe that MFIN - aunique and practice-oriented master's program perfectly suits me and will help enhancemy knowledge base and skills as well as my career prospects.
In 2008, I completed a master's in Economics from xx. As a economics student, I got interested in obtaining afurther master's in finance to enhance my skills and capabilities. After thegraduation, I have been working for accounting firm for more than 10 years. Throughoutmy working experience, I have gained the CPA designation, and an extensiveinsight within this field. My key accounting and financial competenciesinclude, but are not limited to, maintaining financial records, risk assessmentand investment portfolios. In terms of the further professional goals, I amlooking for the position in the capital market.
I believe the Master of Finance Program at xx is perfect for me to study financial knowledge in a morein-depth and systematic way before realizing my dream. I am particularlyinterested in the courses Advanced Corporate Finance and Valuation because Ihave found them essential for me to flexibly navigate financial scenarios atwork. Besides, the curriculum is quite parallel to my ambitions as I want toimprove myself in interpreting financial statements, corporate governance andfinancial modelling. More exciting, MFIN program offers an internationallearning environment where I can gain the advantage to learn to cooperate withpeople from different backgrounds.
With these qualifications, I am confident that I am qualified and ableto perform well in this program. Having the possibility to study at youruniversity would be such a big accomplishment for me, meanwhile having thechance to build my future and possible career represents a huge milestone toreach.
Thank you for considering my application, and I look forward to yourreply.
Sincerely,
xx
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