[Grammar] Could you please help me to correct my letter?

[hoanglan82vn]

Situation : My account is add the role of Pharma section and Medical section. Now I want to change the role:
- Old : Pharma section and Medical section
- New: Consumer section and Medical section
I wrote email and filled in " User registration form" , after 3 weeks i still not received respond from team , so I want to write email for asking about the status of my " registration form" . please help me check below email and correct it . Thanks a lot

Dear team,

On 6 Nov , I sent " User registration form" for adding new role : " consumer section" and remove role " Pharma section"
- Old role on system : Pharma section and Medical section
- request new role on system : Consumer section and Medical section


Because until now, I check my account on system : is still the role of Pharma and Medical – not yet to change the role “ Consumer section and Medical section"

Could you please update the status of my registration form

If need further information, please inform to me

Thanks & Best regard

 

[teechar]

Do you still need help with that, or is it too late?

 

[hoanglan82vn]

Still need, please help me, thanks a lot

 

[teechar]

My account is add

What does that mean?

Dear team,

What is the name of the team? Are they HR?

 

[Tarheel]

My account

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