rodgers white
Senior Member
- Joined
- Jan 17, 2016
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- China
- Current Location
- China
Hi everyone, are there any mistakes in this piece of writing? This is just writing practice, not an assignment or anything like that. I'm grateful for any contribution.
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Although the council did return a few times they weren’t a problem, Yang talked to Councillor Chen about his work and showed him some of the things that he was working on plus Rui’s preliminary designs on Nanobots, of course, Yang had to present Rui’s designs as his own. Yang said to Councillor Chen. “These Nanobots…microscopic robots, will, I hope, be able to build or repair very small things, mechanical or electrical, and with luck, biological too. I’ll be concentrating on the electrical and mechanical, first and foremost, at least until the bots are perfected”. The councillor was excited and eager about the potential of the nanobots and for Yang to make quick progress, but Yang told him it was a long term project and not to expect rapid results. Meanwhile, Rui had already designed the first bot builder, a twenty-five square centimetre factory that would construct one-millimetre bots, a good beginning.
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Although the council did return a few times they weren’t a problem, Yang talked to Councillor Chen about his work and showed him some of the things that he was working on plus Rui’s preliminary designs on Nanobots, of course, Yang had to present Rui’s designs as his own. Yang said to Councillor Chen. “These Nanobots…microscopic robots, will, I hope, be able to build or repair very small things, mechanical or electrical, and with luck, biological too. I’ll be concentrating on the electrical and mechanical, first and foremost, at least until the bots are perfected”. The councillor was excited and eager about the potential of the nanobots and for Yang to make quick progress, but Yang told him it was a long term project and not to expect rapid results. Meanwhile, Rui had already designed the first bot builder, a twenty-five square centimetre factory that would construct one-millimetre bots, a good beginning.