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Yasmin

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A prioner escaped from the low-security prison near the Denver last night.
The police say that he may be dangerous, and warn that the may have weapon.
He escaped over the prison wall at about 3 a.m.
The ladder was found at the scene of a crime. Police do not know how he got a ladder perhaps he has an accomplice.
Police think that he may still be local area, and are continuing to search in the 10 mile radius this is the third prisoners in three years to escape from a prisoner.
A prison, which escaped last year was caught at home eating the breakfast with his wife five hours after escaping. Town mayor has asked for an investigation and better security at prison.
 

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A prisoner escaped from the low-security prison near [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] Denver last night.
The police say that he may be dangerous, and warn that [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] he may have a weapon.
He escaped by climbing over the prison wall at about 3 a.m.
The ladder was found at the scene of the crime. Police do not know how he got a ladder; perhaps he had an accomplice.
Police think that he may still be in the local area and are continuing to search within [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] a 10-mile radius of the prison. This is the third [STRIKE]prisoners[/STRIKE] time in three years [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] that a prisoner has escaped from a prison. [STRIKE]er.[/STRIKE]
A prisoner who [STRIKE]which[/STRIKE] escaped last year was caught at home eating [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] breakfast with his wife five hours after escaping. The town mayor has asked for an investigation and better security at prison.
Welcome to the forum, Yasmin. :)
 

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Welcome to the forum. :hi:

What is the purpose of your short piece of writing?
 
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