[Grammar] I never tried my best when I'm doing something

[autumnerd]

is my grammar correct? someone please help me

"I never tried my best when I'm doing something, I wonder what will happen if I do"

 

[emsr2d2]

Re: please help me is this right?

Is my grammar correct? Can/Could someone please help me?

"I never [STRIKE]tried[/STRIKE] try my best when I'm doing something. I wonder what will happen if I do."

Welcome to the forum. :hi:

Please see my corrections above. For the second sentence, we might also say "I wonder what would happen if I did".

 

[Yankee]

Re: please help me is this right?

Welcome to the forum. :hi:

Please see my corrections above. For the second sentence, we might also say "I wonder what would happen if I did".

Or, "I have never tried my best when I have been doing something".

 

[emsr2d2]

Please note that I have changed your thread title. Titles should be unique, relevant to the thread, and include some/all of the words/phrases you are asking us about.