carmenwong
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As I am creating the trailer for my novel, but I am not sure the grammar problem.
Is there anyone who can help me to check the grammar errors? Thank you very much!
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Since a month ago, her dream is connected with a vampire
On her first day of school, a very mysterious guy has entered her life
but she doesn’t know that he is...
Vampires, witches, werewolves
All supernatural are existing in the world
She wants to run away from those crazy things
However, she has no idea how special she is
Until she found out all the secrets
She realised that she cannot escape the destiny
Falling in love with a vampire makes her...
He pretended not to know her feelings for him
but in deep down, he has known she is so important to him
Dangerous make them feel restless,
but they still want to fight
For love, For peace, For hope
At the same time, they need to face up to their fears
Take the risk of dying in their life
In the end, what do they have to lose for fighting the darkness?
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Is there anyone who can help me to check the grammar errors? Thank you very much!
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Since a month ago, her dream is connected with a vampire
On her first day of school, a very mysterious guy has entered her life
but she doesn’t know that he is...
Vampires, witches, werewolves
All supernatural are existing in the world
She wants to run away from those crazy things
However, she has no idea how special she is
Until she found out all the secrets
She realised that she cannot escape the destiny
Falling in love with a vampire makes her...
He pretended not to know her feelings for him
but in deep down, he has known she is so important to him
Dangerous make them feel restless,
but they still want to fight
For love, For peace, For hope
At the same time, they need to face up to their fears
Take the risk of dying in their life
In the end, what do they have to lose for fighting the darkness?
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