alpacinou
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Hello.
I'm trying to describe the contrast between a very busy class and the silence that ensues after students leave it. I have a character who is in a reflective mood.
He can't think when students are in the class but when they leave, he starts thinking and remembering things.
Can I use "commotion"? What do you think about what I've written:
The commotion of the class gave way to a sudden quiet. Jack looked around. He was the only one left in the now dark class. The images from last night hidden during the busy class started intruding in his mind in the silence. Julia's words still hurt.
I'm trying to describe the contrast between a very busy class and the silence that ensues after students leave it. I have a character who is in a reflective mood.
He can't think when students are in the class but when they leave, he starts thinking and remembering things.
Can I use "commotion"? What do you think about what I've written:
The commotion of the class gave way to a sudden quiet. Jack looked around. He was the only one left in the now dark class. The images from last night hidden during the busy class started intruding in his mind in the silence. Julia's words still hurt.