[Grammar] Returning

[PRD2021]

As discussed with Nathan last week, he reconfirms that he will return to the office first week of August. He is planning to travel by last week of July as he is hoping that all lockdown and travel issues with Covid-19 would be over by then.


Please advise me on whether the sentences above are grammatically correct and natural.

 

[tedmc]

Will he be returning to the office to work? Where is he travelling to on the last week of July?

 

[5jj]

As discussed with Nathan last week, he reconfirms that he will return to the office in the first week of August. He is planning to travel by the last week of July, as he is hoping that all lockdown and travel issues with Covid-19 [STRIKE]would[/STRIKE] will be over by then.

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