A Malay Movie, KL Wangan

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Gaya87

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Hi, can someone please check the following sentences? Thank you.

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Hong and Yudi have a history between them in the arena of street racing, from small and average to high powered car. Years after they have separated, the two have been busy expanding their own businesses. One day, they coincidentally bump into each other once again at a street race without realizing that they are racing against each other. The race has caused Hong to meet in an accident. Will he survive from the deadly accident?

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Years after separating, two friends with a past, Hong and Yudi, bump into each other at a race, unaware of the fact that they are racing each other.
 

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Hi, can someone please check the following sentences? Thank you.

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Hong and Yudi have a history [STRIKE]between them in the arena[/STRIKE] of street racing, from small and average to high-powered cars. Years after they have separated, the two have been busy expanding their own businesses. One day, they [STRIKE]coincidentally[/STRIKE] bump into each other once again at a street race without realizing that they are racing against each other. [STRIKE]The race has caused[/STRIKE] However, Hong [STRIKE]to meet in[/STRIKE] has an accident in the race. Will he survive [STRIKE]from[/STRIKE] the [STRIKE]deadly[/STRIKE] nasty accident?

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Years after separating, two car-racing friends, [STRIKE]with a past,[/STRIKE] Hong and Yudi, bump into each other at a race, unaware of the fact that they are racing each other.

Any help [STRIKE]is going to[/STRIKE] would be appreciated.
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