A Tamil Movie: EVT

[Gaya87]

Hi, can someone please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long summary
A story of an orphan deaf and mute girl who’s in the verge of discovering the outside world after her successful hearing aid treatment. As time progresses, she gets trapped in a farmhouse with a twisted serial killer wearing a wolf mask who’s orchestrating a series of unfortunate events, forcing her to face her greatest nightmare ever.

Short summary
While embarking the journey with sound using her hearing machine, a deaf-mute girl gets kidnapped and trapped in a farmhouse by a masked serial killer disguised as a wolf. Will she survive?

 

[tedmc]

Hi, can someone please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long summary
A story of an orphan, a deaf and mute girl, who’s [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] on the verge of discovering the outside world after her successful hearing aid treatment . As time progresses, she gets trapped in a farmhouse with a twisted serial killer wearing a wolf mask who’[STRIKE]s orchestrating[/STRIKE] orchestrates a series of unfortunate events, forcing her to face her greatest nightmare ever.

Short summary
While embarking the journey [STRIKE]with sound[/STRIKE] where she was able to hear using her hearing [STRIKE]machine[/STRIKE] aid, a deaf-mute girl gets kidnapped and trapped in a farmhouse by a masked serial killer disguised as a wolf. Will she survive?

hearing aid treatment - Do you mean an operation where hearing aids were implanted into her ears? Perhaps an ear operation or ear implant operation.

 

[Gaya87]

hearing aid treatment - Do you mean an operation where hearing aids were implanted into her ears? Perhaps an ear operation or ear implant operation.

Yes, that's exactly what I mean, hearing aids were implanted into her ears.

Small correction for short summary, can I say:

While exploring the world where she was able to hear using her hearing aid...

 

[tedmc]

OK, I missed the "embarking the journey" part which should have been "embarking on a journey to ...".
Yes, "exploring the world" would be better.

While exploring the world with her ability to hear using her hearing aid...