Bassim
VIP Member
- Joined
- Mar 1, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Bosnian
- Home Country
- Bosnia Herzegovina
- Current Location
- Sweden
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Bea walked jauntily into the sea, but in the next moment her cry broke over the water. She lifted her foot and saw a sea urchin under it. She limped to the beach, keeping herself from crying, and lay on her towel. As she looked at the spike inside her foot, she heard a husky voice, "Madam, please let me do it for you." A gorgeously-looking man was staring into her eyes, waving a pair of tweezers.
Bea walked jauntily into the sea, but in the next moment her cry broke over the water. She lifted her foot and saw a sea urchin under it. She limped to the beach, keeping herself from crying, and lay on her towel. As she looked at the spike inside her foot, she heard a husky voice, "Madam, please let me do it for you." A gorgeously-looking man was staring into her eyes, waving a pair of tweezers.