Can someone help me revise this sentences? In this scene the person is in the woods

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mariadoll75

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I think I walked half a mile. I was now close. I push the bushes and vines aside and went in a little closer. I could see what all the commotion was all about, and it was terrifying.
 

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Welcome to UsingEnglish, mariadoll.

One of your verbs is in the wrong tense. Can you spot it?
 
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