[Grammar] "CO2 plays a critical role in maintaining the balance in Earth's atmosphere and the a

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nininaz

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"CO2 plays a critical role in maintaining the balance in Earth's atmosphere and the a

I think that the following sentence is an example of parallel structure:


"CO2 plays a critical role in maintaining the balance in Earth's atmosphere and the air we breathe."

Now,I want to know which part participates in balancing. 1 or 2.


1 "CO2 plays a critical role in maintaining the balance in Earth's atmosphere and (in maintaining the balance in) the air we breathe."


2 "CO2 plays a critical role in maintaining the balance in Earth's atmosphere and (plays a critical role in)the air we breathe."
 

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Re: "CO2 plays a critical role in maintaining the balance in Earth's atmosphere and t

I read it as 1.
 

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Re: "CO2 plays a critical role in maintaining the balance in Earth's atmosphere and t

Only 1 is logical.
 

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Re: "CO2 plays a critical role in maintaining the balance in Earth's atmosphere and t

If I want to expand it , would the following be correct?

"CO2 plays a critical role in maintaining the balance in Earth's atmosphere, and it also plays a critical role in maintaining the balance in the air we breathe."
 

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Re: "CO2 plays a critical role in maintaining the balance in Earth's atmosphere and t

It's unnecessarily repetitive.
 
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Re: "CO2 plays a critical role in maintaining the balance in Earth's atmosphere and t

Welcome to the forum, Robert.

Please read this extract from the Posting Guidelines:

You are welcome to answer questions posted in the Ask a Teacher forum as long as your suggestions, help, and advice reflect a good understanding of the English language. If you are not a teacher, you will need to state that clearly in your post.

 
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