Come true, interfere, intertwine

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Rachel Adams

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Does "come true", "interferes" and "intertwine" sound natural in my text?

"A perfect vacation is when all your plans for this vacation comes true and nothing interferes with you. In winter it's best to go to hot countries by the sea. I want to visit Italy. It's a beautiful country with rich culture. I love how its bustling cities and ancient villages intertwine each other."

I am talking about a perfect holiday.
 

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Do "come true", "interferes" and "intertwine" sound natural in my text?
"A perfect vacation is when all your plans for this vacation come true and nothing interferes with you with no interferences/disruptions. In winter it's best to go to hot countries by the sea. I want to visit Italy. It's a beautiful country with rich culture. I love how its bustling cities and ancient villages intertwine each other are intertwined."

I am talking about a perfect holiday.
See my corrections.
 
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It's a perfect vacation when everything goes just right -- when everything goes just the way you planned.

Try not to be married to certain words or phrases. You might have to delete those words or phrases, and then you will get into a terrible argument with yourself. 😊
 

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Does Do "come true", "interferes" and "intertwine" sound natural in my text?

"A perfect vacation is when all your plans for this vacation comes true and nothing interferes with you work out. In When it's winter at home, it's best to go to on a beach holiday in a hot countries country. by the sea. I want to visit Italy. It's a beautiful country with rich culture. I love how its bustling cities and ancient villages intertwine exist happily alongside each other."

I am talking about a perfect holiday.
As you can see from my changes above, I don't think any of them worked.
 
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