Corporatocracy, Remote neuro monitoring and neurobiological narratives

[DrBlueThumb]

Hello, I would like to write about corporatocracy, remote neuro monitoring and neurobiological narratives.

Can these all go into an essay? Or, should I as a beginner in writing essays, start with one subject at a time, x3, then combine them into one essay?

 

[Charlie Bernstein]

Hello, I would like to write about corporatocracy, remote neuro-monitoring and neurobiological narratives.

Can these all go into an essay? Or, should I, as a beginner in writing essays, start with one subject at a time, times three, then combine them into one essay?

Don't write three and then try to combine them. It won't work. An essay needs a unifying thread, so trying to combine three into one will cause all kinds of problems. It's also a lot more work than just writing one essay to begin with.

So if you have a theme that ties the three together, write one essay. If you don't, write three and leave them alone. Your English writing is already better than most native English speakers', so you can do either with confidence.

 

[DrBlueThumb]

Don't write three and then try to combine them. It won't work. An essay needs a unifying thread, so trying to combine three into one will cause all kinds of problems. It's also a lot more work than just writing one essay to begin with.

So if you have a theme that ties the three together, write one essay. If you don't, write three and leave them alone. Your English writing is already better than most native English speakers', so you can do either with confidence.

Unifying thread means?
Theme?

Thank you for the confidence!

Off topic:

I am starting a group here in Canada, with the hopes it will go international, it is called for now: CSIS-Canadian Secret Intelligence Society, and it is geared towards Christianity and Neuroscience for all people.

I'm trying to be understood in academia, because I did not go to University or College and may never go because of the system and myself. I am trying to go around the system in hopes that one day I may find a place among people of higher education and can speek about things regardless of my level of Schooling.

 

[DrBlueThumb]

Would, how foreign countries can affect the politics of a domestic military, and how the domestic military can affect it's countries politics, be a theme? Or just one of the 2? or is it far from being a subject worth writing about in a essay and may be better suited for a research paper etc?

I get confused with the word, effect, compared to affect.

 

[Raymott]

That all depends on what the essay is for, who it is for, what's the motivation, and do these subjects go together in a coherent manner.

If you want to talk about 'affect' and 'effect', most dictionaries handle this well, but you could start a separate thread on it.

 

[Rover_KE]

If you want to talk about 'affect' and 'effect', most dictionaries handle this well, but you could start a separate thread on it.

Or you can click here, and scroll down to the fifth entry and start reading dozens of previous threads on the topic.

 

[DrBlueThumb]

The essay is for personal use, but one day I would like to influence the government of Canada. The motivation is to persuade the government to think about their actions and how it affects the minority of others.

The last part about if they go together in a coherent manner is something I am trying to figure out. Does a conspiracy theory go together in a coherent manner? imo, my opinion is not a conspiracy theory, but in others opinions, it may be, and I can understand that.

Main objective is to respect others beliefs to a degree, while standing up for mine and expressing it in a respectable way that does so without changing my point of view or objective inwhich I am trying to convey.

My objective is to not care about the majority of the audience and not care about stepping on their toes. But at the same time I want to convince a certain few selective individuals within that audience, that what I am saying is the truth, while respecting the mass majority of people that may be against what I say. I want to present my facts in a respectful way.

Sounds crazy, I am learning about writing. My writing is mainly for myself, to re-read and educate myself. One day I want to inform others.

In the mean time, I am a person with a disability in my psychiatrists opinion, and that imo, I have the right to be heard.

I feel the need to convince my psychiatrist and government officials that I am sane, and that I do not need to be forcefully drugged. Especially if I am not a treat to myself/others or do not threaten myself/others.

How a so called professional can convict an individual on future crimes that did not happen yet, based on past behavior, is imo an inferior intellectual that has no concept of reality and needs to be locked up.

Special word of the day for them: Psychopath. With the upmost respect, sincerely, Clint Paul Johnson.

Liberalism, evolution, feminism, nazism, socialism, communism, etc etc, is a disease and mental disorder, with no cure other than facts, which they do not want to hear.

I know based on this information in which I just provided, that people will attack me intellectually, and grammarly, I am ok with this, this is why I am here to learn. And TEACH.

FYI, every time I see a banana, I think of my psychiatrist.

 

[Raymott]

I see. I think you should start with one simple theme, such as that you should not be locked up without cause. Be logical. Give consistent reasons that lead up to a conclusion. Don't be insulting in your essay. Be as level-headed and objective as you can.

I don't think anyone here wants to attack you. Do you want your grammar corrected or not? You make it hard for us to help if you tell us in advance that you will experience advice as an attack. So, you have made some clear grammatical errors. Do you want us to tell you what they are and correct them, or not?
For example, this is a non-sequitur: "In the mean time, I am a person with a disability in my psychiatrists opinion, and that imo, I have the right to be heard."