Creases

[PRD2021]

The fabric roll received is damaged: there are creases and wrinkles in the fabric supplied.
The damages were due to its packing paper tube was broken because the fabric’s heaviness. It should have wrapped over a strong paper tube, otherwise it would be damaged. So far, we have unrolled six meter of fabric and still there are slight creases and wrinkles. It seems that these creases will be there till the end of the roll.

Please advise me if the sentences above are grammatically correct and natural.

 

[emsr2d2]

The fabric roll received is damaged: there are creases and wrinkles in the fabric supplied.
The damages were due to its packing paper tube was broken because the fabric’s heaviness. It should have wrapped over a strong paper tube, otherwise it would be damaged. So far, we have unrolled six meter of fabric and still there are slight creases and wrinkles. It seems that these creases will be there till the end of the roll.

Please advise me if the sentences above are grammatically correct and natural.

 

[emsr2d2]

The fabric roll we received is damaged; there are creases and wrinkles in the fabric. supplied.

The damages were damage was due to caused by the fact that its packing paper tube was broken broke because due to the weight of the fabric. ’s heaviness. It should have been wrapped over around a stronger paper tube. otherwise it would be damaged.

So far, we have unrolled six meters of fabric and still there are still slight creases and wrinkles. It seems We believe that the entire roll is likely to be creased. these creases will be there till the end of the roll.