lolipop90
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- Uruguay
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Hello!
I'm struggling to describe a particular hat.
I want to describe a snake-print hat that is made of a shiny, slippery fabric (silk or resembling silk) that sort of shines in the sun. The print itself is made of many shades of green. (I'd attach a link to an image of it but I don't know if I'm allowed to!) Anyway, the sentence would go like this:
Maria walked over to the fussing teenager and slammed the shiny, many a green shade fabric down his heat-addled head.
He'd felt an tight bucket hat being forced on his head and knew it had to be the ugly, snake- printed one she'd bought over back in New York. Could I use non-moldable instead of tight to stress the fabric is not stretching?
Do you think the underlined phrases work?
I'm struggling to describe a particular hat.
I want to describe a snake-print hat that is made of a shiny, slippery fabric (silk or resembling silk) that sort of shines in the sun. The print itself is made of many shades of green. (I'd attach a link to an image of it but I don't know if I'm allowed to!) Anyway, the sentence would go like this:
Maria walked over to the fussing teenager and slammed the shiny, many a green shade fabric down his heat-addled head.
He'd felt an tight bucket hat being forced on his head and knew it had to be the ugly, snake- printed one she'd bought over back in New York. Could I use non-moldable instead of tight to stress the fabric is not stretching?
Do you think the underlined phrases work?
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