Diary - I've just watched a mind-boggling documentary

[Maybo]

This is an entry from my diary. Please check it and correct any mistakes.

I've just watched a mind-boggling documentary about a 20-something girl killing her parents and disguising it as a murder by burglars. At first, the girl claimed that her parents'd got killed by burglars and she'd got tied upstairs. As more suspicious details were discovered, the police started to suspect the girl. One of the shocking moment was when she told the police that her university certificates were fake and she'd pretended to go to school for four years. One day, her boyfriend, a drug dealer, helped her find hitmen to kill her parents. The officer believed that her motive behind the killing might be due to the fact that her parents didn't allow her to have any contact with the drug dealer.

 

[emsr2d2]

I think you mean "mind-boggling"!!! Much as I love the idea of someone's mind writing a blog, it's not the right word! Please edit your post to correct the spelling and then we can deal with the rest.

 

[Maybo]

I corrected.

 

[emsr2d2]

I've just watched a mind-boggling documentary about a 20-something-year-old girl killing her parents and disguising it as a murder by burglars. At first, the girl claimed that her parents'd got had been killed by burglars and that she'd got been tied up upstairs. As more suspicious details were discovered, the police started to suspect the girl. One of the most shocking moments was when she told the police that her university certificates were fake and that she'd just pretended to go to school for four years. One day, her boyfriend, a drug dealer, helped her find hitmen to killer kill her parents. The officer believed that her motive behind the killing might be due to the fact that her parents didn't allow her to have any contact with the drug dealer.

See above.

 

[Tarheel]

I corrected IT.