Diary - Recently, my neighbour below my apartment has been renovating their rooms

Maybo

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Recently, my neighbours below my apartment has been renovating their rooms so I can smell the paint all day long. It's so strong that I can't stand it and sometimes feel dizzy. At times, I really want to live in a house so that I wouldn't have neighbours very close to me and wouldn't be affected very much. Fortunately, my neighbour aren't painting the whole apartment in one sitting so I can at least go to different rooms to avoid the smell.
 

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This is an entry from my diary. Please check it and correct any mistakes.

Recently, my neighbours below my apartment has been renovating their rooms so I can get the smell the of paint all day long. It's so strong that I can't stand it and sometimes feel dizzy. At times, I really want to live in a house so that I wouldn't have neighbours living very close to me and they wouldn't be affected affect me very much. Fortunately, my neighbour aren't painting the whole apartment in one sitting go, so I can at least go to different rooms to avoid the smell.
 

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@Maybo Perhaps:

Recently my neighbors below me have been renovating their rooms. The smell of the paint is so strong I can't stand it. It even makes me feel dizzy. Sometimes I wish I lived in a house so I wouldn't have such problems. Fortunately my neighbors aren't painting the whole apartment all at the same time. At least I can go to different rooms to avoid the smell.

Please note that "neighbors" is plural and gets "have".
 
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