[Essay] establish that

[Ashiuhto]

Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks!

After I craved the bank teller for help, I established that I was unaware of the transferred account procedure of banks in China. First,I should have withdrew the US dollars in my account and then asked the bank tellers to exchange it into RMB. Next, I should deposit the sum of RMB in my BOC account. Last, I will be able to use my cash card to withdraw money I want at any ATM of BOC in China.

 

[Odessa Dawn]

Hi.:-D

***NOT A TEACHER***

Your paragraph has already been improved here.

Must see:

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[Ashiuhto]

Thanks for your advice. It's my fault. I shouldn't post one question on different forums. I will rectify my doings.