alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
- Member Type
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- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
Is this correct and natural?
He looked into her eyes, seeing a maze of blood vessels. She was so tired that she saw streaks of red and white darting in and out of focus. She slumped on the bed, sneaking under the duvet. "Don't wanna sleep?" she asked.
"You know something Emily? If I could, I would stay awake forever to look at your hair," he answered.
"Okay. Suit yourself," she said, flicking off the bed lamp.
He looked into her eyes, seeing a maze of blood vessels. She was so tired that she saw streaks of red and white darting in and out of focus. She slumped on the bed, sneaking under the duvet. "Don't wanna sleep?" she asked.
"You know something Emily? If I could, I would stay awake forever to look at your hair," he answered.
"Okay. Suit yourself," she said, flicking off the bed lamp.