[Grammar] IELTS Letter

[foxy nataly]

Hello!

I'm planning to take the IELTS exam in October. I would appreciate if you check my letters.
I want to enhance my English skills. Thank you for your help in avdance.

So, my task is a letter of complaint:

Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you.

Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter:
- introduce yourself,
- explain what the problem is,
- suggest solutions to the problem.
____________________________

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my concern about daily noise on the street where I live.

My name is Natalia Stupak and my family have been renting for two years an appartment in a multi-storey house in the Morton street.
Several days ago I noticed the huge roadworks to next my windows and loud sounds due to this actions. I have a small baby and this noise has negative impact on our daily routine. My son cannot sleep and he always is crying. I visited my family doctor and she confirmed that loud sounds from the works could trigger our health problems including my insomnia.

I would be grateful if you could consider the situation connected with daily noise. The ideal solution would reduce work hours and do roadworks from 8 a.m. to 6 p.m. I believe this matter deserves your attention.

Please let me know as soon as possible what actions you propose to take.

Yours faithfully,
Natalia Stupak

 

[teechar]

Hello Natalia, and welcome to the forum.

Hello!

I'm planning to take the IELTS exam in October. I would appreciate it if you could check my letter.

I want to enhance my English skills. Thank you for your help in advance.

So, my task is a letter of complaint:

Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you.

Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter:
- introduce yourself,
- explain what the problem is,
- suggest solutions to the problem.
____________________________

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to [STRIKE]express my concern[/STRIKE] complain about the daily noise on the street where I live.

My name is Natalia Stupak, and my family [STRIKE]have[/STRIKE] has been renting [STRIKE]for two years[/STRIKE] an apartment for the past two years in a multi-storey house in [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] Morton street.

Several days ago, [STRIKE]I noticed the huge[/STRIKE] the council started major roadworks near our building [STRIKE]to next my windows[/STRIKE] and the loud noise has been unbearable. [STRIKE]sounds due to this actions.[/STRIKE] I have a [STRIKE]small[/STRIKE] young baby, and this noise has [STRIKE]negative[/STRIKE] impacted [STRIKE]on[/STRIKE] every aspect of our daily routine. My son cannot sleep, and he is always [STRIKE]is[/STRIKE] crying because of the noise. I visited my family doctor, and she confirmed that loud sounds from the roadworks could trigger [STRIKE]our[/STRIKE] various health problems, including my insomnia.

This situation is totally unacceptable, and I would urge you to do something about the noise. [STRIKE]be grateful if you could consider the situation connected with daily noise. The ideal solution would reduce work hours and do[/STRIKE] Moreover, the law stiplates that any such roadworks can only be carried out between [STRIKE]from[/STRIKE] 8 a.m. [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] and 6 p.m., not at arbitrary hours as has been the case. [STRIKE]I believe this matter deserves your attention.[/STRIKE]

Please let me know as soon as possible what actions you propose to take.

Yours faithfully,

Natalia Stupak