If I invest 1 million into technologies and recycling resourses markets, will I get back double revenue?

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I talked to my friends about how can I invested in stock and get rich recently. He/She told me that the first thing is you have to hold many money for doing investments.

And then I wrote a sentence as the following, if you can help me to check it's correct and natural?

If I invest 1 million into technologies and recycling resourses markets, will I get back double revenue?
 

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Before we answer, is this a genuine question?!
How many friends did you talk to?
 

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Recently, I talked to my friends about how can I can invested invest in stock and get rich. recently. He/She They (you used "friends" so this needs to be plural) told me that the first thing is you have to hold have many a lot of money for doing investments to get rich from investing.

And then I then wrote a the following sentence. as the following, if you Can you help me to check by letting me know if it's correct and natural?
While we wait for your response to teechar's question, please see my corrections to the rest of your post.
 
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Before we answer, is this a genuine question?!
How many friends did you talk to?
We are joking to talk about how to get rich.
 

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OK, but you still haven't answered my question. I repeat: how many friends did you talk to?
 

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In that case, you should use "they", not "he/she". :)
Always go over (check) what you write before you post it.
I made that correction, and explained why, in post #3!
 
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