Oceanlike
Senior Member
- Joined
- Nov 15, 2014
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- Singapore
- Current Location
- Singapore
I want to describe a scene where after I opened the door (to my house), I saw my sister. And she looked panic-stricken. Can I write the scene in the following manner?
- As I opened the door, I was greeted by my sister in a panic-stricken face.
- As I opened the door, I was greeted by my sister in a panic-stricken face.